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[[Lonely Paradise]]

How we yearn for such a place,
This heaven on earth,
This space that’s ours and ours alone,
But as we see, this paradise,
Is nothing more then an entrapment,
The illusion of paradise has worn away,
This solitude has gone from beautiful to malicious,
Unearthing nerve wracking memories,
This pain of solitude warps me,
Oh how I wish I could suffer the normality’s of yearning for this paradise,
Only to find it’s an illusion,
That yearn that keeps me striving for paradise,
Is something I’d give any paradise away for,
How ironic it is,
To find that paradise is only hell in a mask.

© Morgan Johnson aka GothicTearDrop
Completed on 6/5/2005 12:23 PM
Not to be used without expressed written permission.
©2005-2008 =GothicTearDrop
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Yeah, I dont know, it was an intruiging [[hahah spelling?]] title and so I just wrote, just wrote what i felt and went with it...
Am sad right now, actually, I'm crying...
I dont know...

Morgan

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~lucasblahblah:iconlucasblahblah: Feb 24, 2008, 11:08:44 PM
That's quite beautiful.

You always write beautiful poems, MJ.

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=GothicTearDrop:iconGothicTearDrop: Feb 25, 2008, 12:19:50 AM
thank youuuu
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